【完整语音版】中考一模：助你轻松拿下提意见类作文高分

　　在我们轻松愉快的五一小长假里，我们江博教育精心为大家准备了如何迎战中考一模微课堂(二)。

　　对中考常见的提建议类作文，中高考名师桑宇进行了深入分析，帮大家理清了思路，学习了一些实用句型，并分析了优秀范文写法。

　　为了让大家轻松拿下提意见类作文高分!

　　今天我们把微课堂录音和讲义整理如下：

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　　讲义 一、写作思路 第一段：

　　很高兴收到来信

　　针对问题回答或体谅别人的感受

　　主动提出给别人建议

　　第二段：

　　3条具体建议及原因

　　第三段：

　　提出希望和祝愿

　　二、具体写作分析1开头句：表达同情理解+主动提建议I understand your feelings because I once had the similar problem as you do now.

　　It’s very common for students to do sth. and many students have the same problem like you.

　　Let me offer you some useful advice.

　　(Here’s my advice.)

　　(My suggestions are as follows.)

　　2建议类句型：You are supposed to do....

　　You'd better do ....

　　Why not/ don't you do....

　　It's a good idea to do....

　　If I were you, I would do...

　　I suggest that you should do…

　　3结尾句：I hope what I said can be of some help to you.

　　Just have a try. I’m looking forward to hearing good news from you!

　　Try your best, and you'll make great progress!

　　4优秀范文分析：Dear Lucy,

　　I’m very happy to hear from you. Don’t worry too much. It’s very common for students to dislike memorizing and many students have the same problem like you. Here’s my advice.

　　First of all, you had better preview the new lessons and write down the difficult points before lessons, which can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class. What’s more, you are supposed to listen carefully and try to take part in the class activities. You’ll find that English and history are not as boring as you think. Last but not least, you also need to review the lessons regularly after class. Only in this way, can you understand better and memorize more quickly. If you still feel unhappy, why not have a talk with your teacher and ask for help?

　　I really hope my advice can help you make great progress with your study.

　　                                                   Yours,

　　Zhang Fang